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GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-03-14 01:07 AM

Have you seen me?
Its like I’m lost inside a dream.
Are you here now?
There’s no reality, it seems.

You’re all just figures of my sleeping,
Because this life just can’t be real.
I’m imagining this weeping;
Imagining I feel.

Held within a nightmare;
Surreal and all in guise.
Tell me, can you see me?
Or have I lived
By dream’s harsh lies?

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-14 01:14 AM

Alyssa - to this I can only say - powerful words here:

I’m imagining this weeping;
Imagining I feel.

Imagining I feel - wish so sometimes dont we?

I love to read you - in my head most of the time - and there is a thin line there between feeling and not - very nice xxoo

Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

2 posted 2003-03-14 01:19 AM

Wow. Quite nice indeed. Greatly enjoyed!
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-03-14 02:08 AM

Sue,
Thanks so much. And yea it would be nice for the things to be imagined sometimes, but then its so tragic when you find that what you've faught for wasn't real. Or when things just don't seem like they actually happened, like death or.. so many things. I don't think I'm making sense, its late lol.
Scares me to think ym words are ever in your head! but, I am honored, thanks again

Tanya,
So glad you enjoyed, and thank you for replying too. Hey we live in the same state too

enjoying the rain? hehe

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-03-14 10:39 AM

Alyssa,

Sounds like you are saying you don't have nightmares, you live them.
Very understandable.

Hugs and love, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-14 11:20 AM

Alyssa, I always enjoy reading your poetry. You capture your feelings very well.

Hugs,
Ethel

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-03-14 02:05 PM

well written of these type of feelings, that
sometimes we are too afraid to validate

ngoliant
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since 2003-03-13

Posts 20
Eastof theSun&WestoftheMoon

7 posted 2003-03-14 02:18 PM

The nature of reality is always open to question, if you dare to question it. And if you question it once, you will never totally believe it again.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2003-03-15 09:55 AM

Pat,
yep thats about what I was saying. In my own confusing questioning way.

thanks for replying.

Ethel,
thank you so much

that really does honor me for you to say. I don't write for it to turn out good or change anyones life. I write so I can get these crazy thoughts out lol

inked,
thank you

and yes, some things we can just never be sure of. Guess thats where faith comes in.. or common sense..which I lack! lol

ngoliant,
thats sad but true I believe. After too long of things like this I'd become skeptical and cynical I suppose. Thanks for replying

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-03-16 10:21 PM

I understand this dream you're having...it's a fitful one that's occured to me.

noah j
Member

since 2003-03-05

Posts 82
on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair

10 posted 2003-03-16 10:46 PM

yeah i liked i too.

i had a nightmare one time, but i woke up and it was over. thank god too, because i woke up and my dad was bob saget and my neighbor was ralph macchio, and he was alll hopped up on crack cocaine and he kept trying to pawn me off to all the old ladies down the street. awful dream.

but on a serious note, i thought the poem was very creative in its own way.

noah j

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

11 posted 2003-03-17 12:30 PM

Blues,
Seems we're all in the same dream together though, so fake or not I guess thats good

thanks for understand, for reading, and for replying!

Noah J,
If my dad ever had a hint of being Bob Saget then I might just run away and never come back!! Oh and, I'm sure ya just loved those old ladies

...I'm glad you liked it, thanks for replying.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-03-17 03:52 AM

thought-provoking

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

13 posted 2003-03-17 04:27 AM

Dixie,
thanks for replying. I'd wondered where you'd been!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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