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leighsa
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since 2003-02-27
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Oregon, United States Of America

0 posted 2003-03-16 12:50 PM



Taking Time To Sort Out Her Life
Even though life is passing her by like A speeding bullet
Nothing can stop her in her path
Nothing will make her feel bad
Innocent as she may seem
Living
Life is like a dream
Even if it may seem to be incomplete.


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-03-16 12:55 PM


you just described me to a tee! Wow!
Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 512
Queens NY
2 posted 2003-03-16 03:32 PM


I liked this.
I agree where you say...

Life is like a dream
Even if it may seem to be incomplete.

hate those dreams where you wake up before the ending....

GREAT WORK

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-04-18 03:08 PM


Enjoyed...James
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