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Open Poetry #25

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Laurenel
Junior Member

since 2003-03-12

Posts 17
Georgia, USA

0 posted 2003-03-16 09:53 AM

Caught in a web
Of my own creation
Those tangled vines
That hold me still
Each time I turn
One falls in place
Binding me close
In its hated embrace
My struggles are useless
My thrashing inane
Though my fighting
Is ceaseless
My energy drains
I’m a fly in a web
The threads are my life
And the spider that weaves
Is the core of my mind

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-03-16 11:16 AM

Yes, hate is deadly. Well done, Laurenel.
Snakes...I don't hate them, but I'm not terribly fond of them either 'cept for the garter snakes.

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

2 posted 2003-03-16 03:38 PM

Wow this was powerful. I really enjoyed it! Great work!

~Al

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