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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-02-17 11:38 AM

A difference in the way he walked,
A stranger, to my heart he talked.

~~*~~

Of thorns and barbs, darkness of his reign
fighting for his death of shattered mirror pain.

~~*~~

Honesty aside, delusions, masquerade
the curve, poetic wars, untitled gift unmade.

~~*~~

Speaking to the movement each beat behind the word
a journey into darkness, a home where nothing's heard.

~~*~~

Recaptured love attempts, failing at the test
coining words of emptiness, a trying over-stressed.

~~*~~

An eye to eye mentality, with shades to hide the blue
Insane to think the heart beats free, when wind is howling through.

~~*~~

Never comes the voice, of he who baits the line
Fade the words of yesterday, diminished intertwine.

~~*~~

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-17-2003 11:40 AM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-02-17 11:43 AM

nakdthoughts - as always...

BC

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-02-17 11:54 AM

MzWynterBlue~
You always find the 'write' words to share~
This is quite wonderful, lady~

Hey ... thanks for the e-mail note ... I'm doing okay~
Go down to Corner Pub and check out this whole thingie ....
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Having met June and seeing some of her beautiful artwork .... you'll appreciate the notes tucked in the replies~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2003-02-17 12:02 PM

Quotable couplets...
well done, Maureen...

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2003-02-17 08:14 PM

Very well expressed, Maureen. Sad yet lovely still.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-02-18 10:49 AM

Wow...this really hit deep.
Thanks,
Eric

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2003-02-18 11:57 AM

~M~

Liked them all by the eye to eye one is my favorite. It is perfect.

Thanks for sharing with us. Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-02-18 12:20 PM

in awe....

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