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Big Wave |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Chorus: ---------------------- Big wave moving onward To the shore... Surprising... Creating a beautiful cry In the sea. As I walk along the beach I feel no fear... Of flood. It is just the nature sounds... Of the sea uniting with the earth. Rocks absorb light, And sea cool them down. Even crabs need a sun bath, Moving across the sand, Showing off their muscles, Posing their best show. I hear laugher from the birds, Whispering something among their ears, Giggling and chasing With each other and worry free. ---------------------- If... If we all can be always free like birds, Then, Then there won't be so much racing chase. Birds... Chase each other, but with harmony. The world... Chase each other, but with hurt feelings Repeat Chorus Sea... Sometimes brings solaces to trouble minds. Sea... Sometimes are but full of sorrow sentimental. Sea and birds... If only... Chorus ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is really beautiful. I mean it is beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful descriptive writing...James |
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