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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Expert Seems I was the expert on destroying everything we had, and ruining the chances for obtaining all of the good things we would of had. You told me I ruined your self esteem. I shattered hopes and I destroyed dreams. And now even though my words may seem insincere or sound untrue I will take the risk of sounding foolish to you. Please believe me when I say that I will always love you. JamesLee March16 2003 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ah,James, did you really do all that? Perhaps those last words will be all she remembers in time. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh...a poet voices regret. Sounds like you need a hug. and yanno? Our mistakes define us more than our successes--it's when we acknowledge them and feel genuine remorse and responsibility that we grow. So..here's yer hug, lovie!  You continue to bare your soul, m'friend. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - sometimes it isnt even you that is in the wrong - it is the other person whu just needs to escape - this i slovely and yes you do need a hug - Rule #1: dont beat yourself up for other poeples choices - this was a tough one for me to learn - xxoo |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, here's my hug for you, too... "Love makes the world go around" ~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-16-2003 12:10 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Midnitesun, serenity, littlewing, garysgirl and passing shadow for the nice responses and the hugs. Although this happened a long time ago mistakes that affect a failed marriage have lifetime repercussions. I don't know how many times regret will remind me that I played the part of a fool. Who else could claim they love someone so deeply and treat them so badly? James |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is sweet and tender in its sincerity. Very nicely said. Eric |
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