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P.R.C
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-03-14 05:58 PM



You dont realise it breaks my heart
That you two live apart
You dont see it hurts when you fight
I feel like its my fault, I cant do anything right
I love you both,
Of course I do, sometimes you dont think this
All I ever wanted was family bliss
To be loved by parents who love each other
And not just me
But you dont really see
That you hurt me,
That you break my heart
And as I sit here crying
Trying to write this
Dreaming of family bliss
Can we sort it out?
Cause its killing me,
I need you to see
How much I am hurting
But you never will do
I hide it from both of you
I dont wanna add to your troubles
So I just let (edited by moderator) happen
I dont wanna cause anymore hurt or anymore pain
All of this is hurting my brain
But most of all, its broken my heart
This will never mend
Because you never had enough love to lend
I have never been number one
And in your eyes I have never shone
Its aalways been about both or you
And about him and her too
Well did you ever stop and think
How you make me feel?
I wish all this wasnt real
I need it to stop
One way or another
Maybe in my death
You would unite
Or maybe it would
Cause too much pain
While you look
For someone to blame
When all the time it was you.......
My dear family

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-14-2003 08:21 PM).]

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-03-15 12:12 PM


Hannah:

Or maybe it would
Cause too much pain
While you look
For someone to blame
When all the time it was you.......
My dear family


know this feeling all too well - xxoo

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since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes
2 posted 2003-03-15 01:08 AM


OUCH!!!!!
This is all to real. It was a very excellent write.

~You might say I'm a Dreamer, but I'm not the only one...
John Lennon

GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
3 posted 2003-03-17 12:38 PM


its all almost ironic.
Very real, I guess sometimes people just don't realise, and don't give the love they should. I understand your feelings all too well.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-03-17 02:55 AM


yeah...it's sad
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