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sellout007
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0 posted 2003-03-14 03:08 PM


~ Just This Once ~

Why wont it ring? why wont you call?
Just this once would you think of me?
Not asking alot, not too much...
It is my one and only simple plea!!!

Just this once id like for you to care!
Just this once pretend that I am here!
Just this once act like...a friend to me...
Its all ive ever wanted from you, a friend to me!!!

To hear your voice, sets me at ease.
To listen to your stories, puts me at peace.
You will never know what it means to me...
Youll never understand the love that i feel!!!

Because if you did, you would have been a friend to me...

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

© Copyright 2003 Daniel Kelly - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-14 04:43 PM


this is heart-breaking...
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2 posted 2003-03-14 04:48 PM


You captured this pain very well in verse
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3 posted 2003-03-15 03:50 PM


Nice writing...james
sellout007
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4 posted 2003-03-17 11:55 PM


Thanks for reading. o)

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

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