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Open Poetry #25

Ode To You

Little_One
Junior Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 34
montana

0 posted 2003-03-17 12:33 PM

The Angels brought you to earth one day
To help me learn to nicely play
When we were little we always fought
In trouble, the other would help us get caught
Now our relationship is strangly unreal
Feelings for eachother we never thought to feel
Without you in my life I dont no where I would be
You helped me through life lessons that I didnt wish to see
Sometimes I wished you were not around
But without you a part of my life I would have never found
We helped eachother through thick and thin
Together we fought and succeded to win
Growning up was difficult with one anohter
But I will always love you, my dearest brother

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-03-17 02:58 AM

wonderful writing!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-17 08:17 PM

Kristen - what a beautiful testament:

You helped me through life lessons that I didnt wish to see

this is the only way we learn and lucky for you - you have a hand to hold there xxoo

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

3 posted 2003-03-17 09:08 PM

Lovely and sweet!
Warm greetings,
Etain.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2003-03-17 10:25 PM

interesting reflections on the complexities of sibling relationships

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

5 posted 2003-03-17 11:12 PM

Love it KK

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