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Open Poetry #25

Lost and Confused

Little_One
Junior Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 34
montana

0 posted 2003-03-17 01:58 AM

I talked to you yesterday
I could talk to you for hours anyday
While you were whispering your sweet words into my ear
I want to gaze into your dark eyes
But I can't, I want to, but I can't
I gues we were not close enough
will we ever be close enough?
I fear this for there is more than miles keeping out touch apart
She is there, always there
And when I dont' see her she is in my memories
And at night she is in my dreams, haunting my dreams
Will she ever leave?
Do you love her?
I can't tell
When I look into your eyes they look lost and confused
But you try and hide it
And its only those rare moments when I can tell your confused
For you hid it well and make me believe your lies
And I believe you
Your lies made me smile
That smile youve seen does not come about ofton
For it is been forever she the sun and the roses seen that smile
usually the sun is covered by the dark cloudy look that is seen in my eyes
But I promise I'll find out what feelings are looked into your heart
All I have to do is get the key
Now how do I get it?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-03-17 02:46 AM

I know this well...nicely expressed, loved the ending

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-18 01:18 AM

Kristen - goodness I know this all too well:

When I look into your eyes they look lost and confused

yesss exactly! Unfortunately that key ahhh they keep it for themselves - will never understand it myself - very nice write - xxoo

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