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The Eye of the Needle
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The Eye of the Needle |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Eye of the needle To pass the soul through the needles eye You must say goodbye. Breathe your goal to the mist of smoke And you must not choke. Dance the sound of silent music Without getting sick. Send half your heart to revel The rest the devil See three diminutions as one Then you have begun. Make real of your imagine For it’s the javelin. Pass your ghost to the other side There you will abide. In an anti worlds negative force And that is the course. The needle shapes an hourglass And some never know of the pass. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your ending couplet cups time perfectly... Good morning Sy... always, my pleasure to read... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah here you are... Enjoyed the morning read Sy! Tea's on....and it's Friday!!! ~Morning hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Very interesting write. How you manage to gift us with such poetry each morning is beyond me! Blueberry muffins with your tea? hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
good morning, Sy..I enjoyed today's poem.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dance the sound of silent music Without getting sick. Send half your heart to revel The rest the devil See three diminutions as one Then you have begun. Make real of your imagine For it's the javelin. ================================ Those two verses alone pass the reader thru the eye of the WAY COOL needle!!!! You stitch your name in the sands of time with your golden threads of rhyme divine. (and across this mothy heart of mine)   *ww*    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine To bask in you sunshine is my pleasure. Nancy, Thank you dear and good morning. Chris, Blueberry muffins, my pleasure. scorpio Thank you my friend. Jm, WWRS and all that stuff. See you in my dreams. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A wonderful morning read Sey.....morning hugs to you doll. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Oh my! Interesting write, for sure. It is also food for thought. And one I will come back to read again and again to get better clarity. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, a poem full of wisdom, this morning. Thank you, Sir. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...Your poem describes the indescribable..a place and means of dreams..you're good! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...yeah |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Thank you and hugs back. Pat, A fine reply. Ethel, Thank you my dear. Martie, passing shadows, sigh...yeah, thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) And by all means necessary, that needle must face out straight to the horizon so it can reach beyond what we see of dawn! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good stuff, Sy. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Sandra. |
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