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Ocean Blue |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Ocean Blue I am as a corked bottle lost in the vastness of ocean blue I know the sun will rise again but nothing else seems true I am cast adrift where ships have come and ships have gone and in this barren cold current I remain alone Shall I disappear here fading to the same hue as these endless rolling swells with my message unread by you © 022003 |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Naw, wait for the warm gulf stream. It'll steer you somewhere pleasurable. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
either that or someone will find you and open your secrets held within... I like this.... :-) KS |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, on these pages of blue your messages are read! Enjoyed your poem. Sort of like the proverbial 'ship without a rudder' scenario. Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
and we all disappear . . . mostly unread thanks for stopping by |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well look what I found here in the blue.. Much enjoyed the read too. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sail where the waters are more turquoise, then dive in for pearls and before you know it you are back in the lagoon! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I read this poem...and enjoyed it...please keep posting you write very fine pieces...and they are read.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey, I feel myself get more invisible every day. I know the lost feeling. This is very well expressed. Hugs Sandra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am cast adrift where ships have come and ships have gone I got your drift and it is beautiful. Loved your title too. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Krawdad - I loved this . . . adrift . . . just waiting to be discovered - very nice xxoo |
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