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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
You left your thought print upon my soul, to only you do I belong. Your silent tongue mouthed my heartsong and mind mists swirled my spirit dizzied me a vacuum formed sucked me so far into you I beat your heart you breath my lung new embryo formed our love's begun pressurized exquisite pain exploded flash instantaneous ~the knowing~ I love you! And, want you more than yesterday and greater than tomorrow I need you now. . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an intense arrival at desire and understanding..well captured.... enjoyed this..and how it almost spirals into an ending of urgency... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed the read Pat... This one is going into my library... A keeper for sure..very well done. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very well written about passion and desire nice to read you again |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Your words passionately sketched , how someone remains forever heart and soul etched Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, A clear declaration, enjoyed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ron, If this happened at my age, it certainly would be urgent. Tsk! Thanks for reading and responding. Nancy, Thanks, for the well done and saving it. Michele, Yes, if you don't have it, you might as well write it. Smiling here. Thanks for your response. Hope, Yes, a heart and soul etch. Thank you for reading and responding. Seymour, Yes, it is, now if I can just find him, and he better be half blind and definitely near deaf, for I snore... Smiling here, thanks of replying. Hugs, to all, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
can definitely feel the intensity and urgency in this. Well done write.. if I was awake I could think of better things to say, but know I enjoyed.  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh Alyssa, Thanks for the laugh, though not funny about your condition. Glad you liked this. Written quickly. Energy level is nil... I think the urgency was in getting it written and finished. Hope you can start sleeping better. God be with you...Hugs and love, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beaituful work. Eric |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A very well written piece. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Patricia, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, this made me tear up as I understand this urgency and hope your heart is always fulfilled with this love without the odd-ends and intentional aches! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love nand light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Eric, Thnk you for reading and replying and for the beautiful. Dave, Thank you especially for reading and leaving a reply. I know how limited your time is and I really appreciate it. Glad you think it well written. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, Pat, especially since this isn't from your present reality! Well, sometimes we write best from past memories...or desires! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, I loved the way you wrote this.  . . I don't know how I missed this when I was on here earlier today...goofy me  . Hugs, Ethel |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
regards you had me at the opening... You left your thought print upon my soul, to only you do I belong. WOW WOW WOW WOW I loved it!!!! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
And, want you more than yesterday and greater than tomorrow I need you now. A wondrous passage of one practically in heat for the presence of a lover. I'm envious *S*. Thank you..Ken J |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! breath-taking! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Pat, glad that i came across this...the title was intriguing and the content a passionate intense heartwarming read... why isn't this in Reflections? |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kaile, You are a nag!!! Smiling. I have two poems in reflections, already. Glad you like this. Thank you. Smiling again, at your nagging, I appreciate you! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yup, I know..i have replied to both of them already... i think this is very good.. mind mists swirled my spirit dizzied me a vacuum formed sucked me so far into you Splendid imagery our love's begun pressurized never heard of love beginnings being described as "pressurized"...definitely a cool correlation.. instantaneous ~the knowing~ I love you! this melts my heart..  |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kaile, Thank you, really...I so appreciate you taking the time to point out certain phrases, lines.... I am glad you like this. I know, you too have a few in Reflections. I have had such a busy last few days haven't had as much time needed to review all in Reflections. This morning, already spent close to two hours on the first page of it. Wonderful poetry there, and here, hard to keep up....but, now I am late, as usual to start this day with just as important things....which didn't get finished when they should have. Always good to hear from you. I'll catch up with yours in Reflections sooner or later (I know that is not why you commented here, smiles) and you already read my comment to you re  ?) aborted...(?) title(?)so talented are you!!!! wow! on that one...Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
- And so it was that time stood still - |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pat~ Ahhhhhhh, they may have thought I forgot ... I did not~ This is beautifully written~ Sometimes the vision of what might be is even more beautiful than the reality~ Keep writing, gal ... I'll sure keep reading~ When you coming back ? 'SOON' ? I hope so ... I truly hope so~ You've done all the mending of fences that could be required of anyone ... so I'm sure it'll be 'soon'~  May He continue to bless you ... what a lovely faith you hold dear~  I love you ... love your friendship ... love the supreme poetess in you~ Guess that pretty well covers it, eh ?  Love and *Huglets* for a beautiful evening, and a better tomorrow~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pat~ Yep ... here ya' are !! Love you~ Let's make this one a twopager~ *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~  Howdy~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
had to read again |
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