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One Word, Felt
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Odd, One word, felt Can cause Bravery To sail The day's storm And hail The night's harm Giving Courage To face the Unknowns One word, felt. ~Love!~ . . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Indeed! It holds the true power! LOVE! ... felt. Beautiful word-s! Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love is a many splendored thing...  Love & Light, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes!!!  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Thanks all for reading and replying. Certainly this isn't my best poem but after having read poetry awhile this AM I felt inspired to capture my feelings about feeling loved.... It can change one's outlook tremendously.... Hugs to you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Chuckling here...don't do anything stupid though..as they say, love can be blind...like the way you used "sail" and "hail"...unusual rhymes here... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kaile, I don't do anything stupid...[very often] smiles.... Here is how it goes: SAIL: As in [through in victory] HAIL: As in [salute; yet power to pass unscathed] Thank you. I do appreciate you taking the time to read my poetry and to type out a thoughtful reply. It means a lot to be acknowledged even to novice poets, or maybe, especially to, novice poets such as myself...it is supportive and encouraging... Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Pat = amazing: One word, felt Can cause Bravery To sail The day's storm And hail The night's harm I would have voted for this . . .xxoo |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sue, Thank you. I have two in the book already and feel very fortunate indeed....what a nice thing to let me know...had been reading poetry and besides that, a very dear lady here had sent me the nicest e-mail and made me feel quite good...~special~ and loved and cared about...wanted to capture those feelings of what a difference ~feeling~, not knowing, but feeling loved makes....like you can conquer anything! I appreciate you taking the time to read and to reply. Glad you liked, Hugs, Pat Thanks again...means a lot.... ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
So very true, Pat! Beautiful! Sunkissed. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
One word felt is what makes them worth giving, ...and I thank you for yours Pat~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pat~ In it's brevity, this is just so beautifully done~ You sure know how to work a thought~ I just LOVE this~ Yep ... there's that word~  Know what ??? ... you're just one of the nicest ladies I know~ I am soooooo glad that God saw fit to put you in my life~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ Why there YOU are AGAIN ???  Take those shades off ... I seeeee you~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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