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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
My heart aches, for a great ascension of powerlessness. Among the tenets of belief as a boy rising, from America put, is of manhood graced...power is mine. These days lay waste to power. I have been represented...not of my will. Loathed as I am by my birthright, woe to you should terror approach me, or mine; extended by your hand. Allah and God alike send love and strife; we deserve this and more. Peace to you. Upon ourselves will come a healing. Upon ourselves will come resolution and meaning. machiner |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I'm enjoying the depth of your Constructive Critiques message as much as your poetry. You will leave us much to ponder on, I am sure. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
machiner.......Welcome to passions...the things that are hardest to write and read, are many times the best. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) This is such a very heartaching debut, sweet friend, it saddens me to see all the pain and misunderstanding between each and every one of us as we all bleed the same color, we all share the same emotions, and believe in some supreme Being and I only wish we can all unite together again and find solace! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspied by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done and thought provoking! |
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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
Thank you all for your kind words. Brian |
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