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Open Poetry #25

Adrift

Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-03-13 04:35 PM

Adrift

Seeds adrift at sea
Landing on deserted shore
To flourish again

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-03-13 04:36 PM

coconuts...

chuckling..so often we are like that.. adrift..waiting to find fertile ground in our life to take root..to grow...

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (03-13-2003 04:42 PM).]

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2003-03-14 01:13 PM

Words filled with hope. Well done. Bob

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2003-03-14 01:20 PM

Oh, I like that. The image is so strong in so few words. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-03-14 01:22 PM

Yes, you said a lot in
few words. I love these.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

ngoliant
Junior Member

since 2003-03-13

Posts 20
Eastof theSun&WestoftheMoon

5 posted 2003-03-14 03:13 PM

I love to read good haiku - so much is said in so few words - distilled spirit.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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6 posted 2003-03-14 04:42 PM

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