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IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

0 posted 2003-03-13 04:14 PM

I understand your world is different and
Advanced from the ancient days.
But where you lead is a repeated past
And you are similar in her ways.

I send my formal warnings,
To those who hear my call.
To the world do cold and raged, I say,
Beware! For you will soon fall.

The looming clouds of war grow menacing,
Threatening the fragile banner of peace.
And the furied hawks of chaos will
Tear her up with ease.

Go and solve your conflicts
With a true and gentle heart.
For the war the Eagle calls for
Shall shred you all apart.

I've seen glimpses of your future,
Where your world is bleak and scarred.
Dead beyond repair.
The outcom of this war.

I'm afraid the time grows near
Where this place will be my domain.
For if the battle goes forth,
Not one life shall remain.

Do not take the path of destruction,
For it's deadly as a thousand thunders.
Follow the road of peace,
Or else be rent asunder.

- Sincerely
Death

Stolen Simplicity
Junior Member

since 2002-11-07

Posts 22
Canadian

1 posted 2003-03-13 07:21 PM

I liked it.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-03-14 01:25 AM

oooo very wise. Loved this!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

3 posted 2003-03-14 01:28 AM

Sad, but true. It brings painful tears to my eyes. Beautiful..
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

DarkSide_Blues
Junior Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 41
Fl, Usa.

4 posted 2003-03-14 02:09 AM

Wow, I dunno if it was meant to or not, but this evoked thoughts of 9/11 and the upcoming war, and such. Powerful peice, and I liked the scenario of it being a message from Death. Kind of gives you a "being caught by a parent on vacation" kinda feel.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-03-14 09:54 AM

chuckling...I just wrote "weary" even before I got the M.E.M.O!

sighs, with a thank you, I think.

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

6 posted 2003-03-14 06:07 PM

Thanks for all your supportive comments. It's nice to be able to share feelings wid others.

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