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Forgive me
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Tristan Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 29 |
(this is my first post, and i'm just making it up last minute. let me know what you think. sorry about spelling errors) I realize Trust is made out of respect. i know i lie, and that trust and respect is gone. I know it's wrong, and that i don't want to do it again. I know i will, and it just kills me inside. I realize you think i'm telling the truth, and i know i'm not I've lied to so many people, and they pity me, but not for my lying. they pity what I tell them, and It breaks my heart to make you belive. Please forgive me, please say you care. If you're up there God, I hope you forgive me too. Even if these people here don't |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I should be taking the fifth...but~ without sounding harsh, I would have to say, think about who you pity~ Hope it helps to type it out~ |
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Tristan Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 29 |
It's not true. it was inspired by this person I know |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
trust, once lost, is very hard to regain... hopefully you can get this point across to your friend... glad to know it's not a personal write :-) KS |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
oh, and even if no one else on this green earth will forgive, God always does when asked.... :-) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Tristan - Welcome to PIP! so were those YOUR words or . . . im just kidding lol - you will like it here - nice place to bear your soul xxoo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Tristan. Interesting write. Hope to see more of your inspirations. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!  Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...[This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-13-2003 06:31 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I shall be looking for more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tristan, this is such a sincere and heartpouring debut, sweet friend, know deep down He always teaches forgiveness and it takes years to understand what it is but love will always make amends for us all! Yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Tristan, may you be inspired by all of us here as ww will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tristan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
 Enjoyed your first post...I hope to read more..believe in what your heart feels... |
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