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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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In between powerline buzz and airwave static through honk of horn machine whir and inane chatter Your voice rang clear, the first time in aeons sweetly laced upon enchanted strings of Vivaldi's Spring Can the dead rise again? [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-11-2003 08:53 PM).] |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
you have an unuasual style of poetry.  . But in a good way.Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I love how you can pack so much into so few words. Your writing has such impact... as if it jumps off the screen onto my shoulder Awesome work. the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
An evokative one. Ed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now you've made me want to grab Vivaldi. |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
I liked it! Mysterious, yet so filled with music. Love, Etain. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Raph, do love your metaphors! Excellent! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Connel unusual style? I didn't think I had any style really thanks icequeen appreciate the kind words Thanks Ed i try Kacy go I just spent two hours with my classical music, makes one restore faith in the beauty mankind can create..at least until you watch the news Thank you Etain kind words Thanks Barry always a pleasure to see you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So leave the news for another day, go back to the music and have a great night. That's what I intend to do...Keith Jarret awaits my ears at this very moment. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph - ahhhh Vivaldi - yess - wishing you more moments of such utter tranquility - that voice? listen to it . . . this IS music . . . as always xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-12-2003 01:17 AM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Kacy I avoid it when possible sometimes it fins you anyway Thanks Sue love my Vivaldi..those strings |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Now that's what I'm talking about...*goes back to her corner now* ciao...honestly what are you feeding your muse!? If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks gemma Kris she feeds me thanks vandana! [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-12-2003 09:14 PM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Your voice rang clear, the first time in aeons sweetly laced upon enchanted strings of Vivaldi's Spring'' enchanting.... Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Woo-hoo! Sounds like a couple of 'em just might.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
...makes me long to grab my violin and play some Vivaldi ;-) beautiful, sweet..... I love your writing Aenimal... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Greeneyes Hope so Ratleader Play Kristen play! |
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