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I Like How This Feels Again
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I Like How This Feels Again |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
I like how this feels again Hmmmm, this is nice I'm watching you sleep It's such a beautiful night Sheet draped over you just right Won't let you out of my sight And I'm thinking I just might Naw, this can't be happening again You inhale and exhale slowly A blank look on your face I can't help but to stare At how heavenly you appear I'm so glad that I'm here And I'm wondering could we share Oh no, I feel it over me again You stretch and open your eyes Call me over to lay by your side This connection just can't be wrong And this moment feels so strong It was meant for us to belong Now I realize I knew all along I like how love feels again ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautifully done, SweetSerenity. write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
such feelings are both frightning and a relief.. you did this well... I enjoyed |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
enjoyed the Wind is invisible. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done... and....WELCOME TO PASSIONS! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity Me Too, enjoyed. |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Speechless - I am. Beautiful writing! CD |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
Thanks for your appreciation of my writing! ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SweetSerenity - I'm so glad you wrote and posted this poem, I like how it feels again also, thank you... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Deon, I just love this, sweet friend, this made me smile as you are deserving of this joy and hope you always feel this same way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Deon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love how love feels...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, SweetSerenity...doesn't love feel absolutely marvelous???? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 me too |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Lovely thoughts here.......enjoyed it a lot Charisma |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I like how love feels again"--it shows!--and I am happy for you! Warm hugs, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Long distance? |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sweetly senual and I loved it! |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
MMmm I loved this! Watching someone sleep and feeling that old feeling ya get  deep down inside |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Yep, must be love! Lovely poem. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, and I really like how this poem reads! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ohhh yes....isn't that feeling wonderful.... Sensual piece indeed...very nice!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
Thanks for the appreciation of this poem! New work is on the way!! ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
this is beautiful vote in~Every girl has a dream within. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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