Open Poetry #25 |
Father + Son = Fun |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Phone heavy in hand Fever, cold, sore, joints ache but this...this...is infinitely more painful Dial tone screams in ear each number a tolling death bell ..a ring..a sigh THE voice kicks in vampires couldn't drain me as fast as this "Let me guess, you're not coming.. I knew you'd call sick sooner or later.." I want to yell for not believing I want to yell how lucky he sees me at all I want to yell and remind him of what keeps me away when i'm not sick But I just laugh and hang up instead sputtering in cough marvelling at a man who will never get it.. [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-02-2003 10:23 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Powerful, Check my post "sorry " on insights in mature, and you know that I get this. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Jason checking it now, check my Days and dad the martyr and Father in the archives lol |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
After reading yours, I thought you would like that, my fav experience was close to yours. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Jason nice to know someone understands and isnt afraid of my words lol |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Aenimal - I know too well that choked forced silence and sputtering of words that never want to leave your lips but do - only because they must . . . my heart to you - as always amazing xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"marvelling at a man who will never get it.." I swim in your poetry like it's a cool ocean on a summer day in the dead heat of Florida [This message has been edited by passing shadows (03-03-2003 04:05 AM).] |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
People do not get love, the people who do; sitting here alone, waiting for the one that does. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I understand but from a different perspective...they don't make Mother's Day cards for my mother. I get it. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I cannot count the many times I have noted, how blessed I was to have parents who were unconditional in their acceptance of me, even in my mistakes... Raph? I'm sorry... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
..... happens in the best families! The real pain would come if you would not call, but you do, bravo figlio! Efficient ... bittersweet fun. Love, Margherita |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks angel i know you do Dixie why don't you rub it in a little more, i'm freezing in the cold snow of Toronto lol rkcraig ..um..yes Sharon sorry to hear that how come there's no offspring's day? karilea that's very sweet it's ok it was probably all for the best or some jazz like that i think i turned out um...ok-ish? Thank you Margherita the real pain is him, in the @$$ of course. Picciarida mia (Siciliani lol) |
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