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SweetSerenity
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

0 posted 2003-02-16 11:55 PM

I couldn't give you anymore
From what was there
All that was said
All that was shared
All that was given
All that I had to offer
It was all left there
For you to accept
Or for you to reject
I showed you my soul in tears
Showed you my heart through touchs
Showed you the pain in my eyes
Showed you defeat in forgiveness
But it was left at your footsteps
Rejection
But I restore my soul through tears
Conceal my pain through the sun
Abandon my defeat and forgive love
I'm glad caue now I believe
You didn't deserve anymore

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-16 11:57 PM

This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-02-17 12:24 PM

So sweet,
Serenity,
and yet so very hard;
like a new pocket knife, shiny
but sharp.

That's a cinquain, which is the featured style in the Workshop forum this month......c'mon over!

I hope we get to see a lot more of your work.

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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-17 12:45 PM

This is a nice poem, Serenity.
I liked it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-02-17 03:29 AM

I can understand too well...much like my own life

SweetSerenity
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

5 posted 2003-02-17 05:52 AM

Thanks for all the love people. I will now be a regular through these forums and will continue to post my work!

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-02-17 11:28 AM

Hi there!

Nope, you're not me. grin...(for a second I thought I'd been cloned without my knowledge!)

But welcome to the forum, SisterSerenity!

It's a pleasure to read your work, and I look forward to more in the future...

y'just can't have enough serenity!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-02-17 12:05 PM

Welcome to Passions! I hope you find the Serenity you are looking for, as now we have two...I may need to hand out mirrors just so we know who is who! Please, have a wonderful time, and check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-02-17 12:05 PM

SweetSerenity~
Welcome to Passions~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SweetSerenity
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

9 posted 2003-02-17 12:27 PM

I thank you all for your welcomes.
They are much appreciated!!!

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-02-17 02:29 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Yay! Oh Deon, this is so wonderfully said, sweet friend, love forgives all and you will find forgiveness through love, this is a very touching debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Deon, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Deon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

11 posted 2003-02-22 10:39 PM

Simply beautiful in a solemn way. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2003-02-25 06:15 PM

Welcome to Passions and what a lovely poem for your posting.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

13 posted 2003-02-25 06:19 PM

~~SIGH~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2003-02-25 07:21 PM

Welcome to Passions....well done!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-02-25 07:29 PM

What a Wonderful first post.. This is the best way to start out, publishingh some of your work.. Beautiful!!

And welcome to passions.. I just know your gonna love it here. The people here are just so nice.. Good luck to ya!

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

16 posted 2003-04-17 09:20 PM

What great writing it should get in the book

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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