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Silver_Tryst
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since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

0 posted 2003-03-10 10:20 PM

Hello, im a new poster, i hope this works, if it does hopefully this will be the first of many, Helpful Critisism is always useful thanks

Luv Again,

You made me love you
against my will-
You made my world stop
everything stand still.
I awoke with a smile
and looked forward to each day-
But as quickly as you brought my happiness
you stole it all away
I could feel my heart breaking
it split right in two-
I did not think I could love another
not a soul after you.
The nights grew long
and the tears would always fall-
I dreaded everyday
that I knew you would not call.
Over time it got a little easier
I eventually learned to stand again-
But I wondered deep inside
if this fight I could ever win.
Well, now some time has passed
and I have met someone new-
She is so sweet, kind, and caring
just the opposite of you.
I may not trust her, though I want to
is betrayal to one's self a sin-
But after the way you hurt me I just don't know
can I learn to love again?

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2003-03-10 11:24 PM

Yes, you can and will learn to love again. Don't let your entire happiness depend on one person. I liked this cause I could relate to this so well. Good work and welcome to Passions! Hope to see you around more.

Liz

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

2 posted 2003-03-11 12:13 PM

Kinda like getting back on the saddle after being thrown. Try and enjoy the ride. welcome.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-03-11 02:48 AM

Shayne - Welcome to PIP! Very good write - and yes - you have an entire life ahead of you there - can relate to this one much to well xxoo

sellout007
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 108
Suburbs of Chicago, IL

4 posted 2003-03-11 03:30 AM

First off.... WELCOME!!

Secondly.... GREAT POEM! I hope you dont mind if i send this to someone that did the exact same thing to me!

Absolutely awesome poem!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

[This message has been edited by sellout007 (03-11-2003 03:31 AM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-03-11 06:25 AM

Nice writing...enjoyed...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-03-11 06:44 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please,
check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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