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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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did you think, in a blink, untouched yet hands, pounding keys could sink, unspoken words of pretty Ink, so deep inside? without a wink, of any eye to eye, contact, between cyberlovers? but girlfriend, before your heart, becomes a flutter, did you know this, cyberlover, did so utter these same words making a heart shutter, of another.............. and another................. and another...................... [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-10-2003 06:40 PM).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"of another ... and another, and another " I believe "recycled" means to use over ... are all your hearts reusable? eye to eye ... sounds like a stinger! I re-read and feel the "girlfriend" is close ... perhaps a "used" heart. A message within. [This message has been edited by ctowen (03-10-2003 08:13 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Awwwww .... too late for any reasoning ..... the hearts flutter ..... one, two, three .... Enjoyed! Margherita |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michele, Can only laugh at your wit, here. Should reread this for unclear if you are the cyberlover, or a ~he~ is.... In either case, I think you probably are quite right, if you meant ~a he~... I did re-read it, and your reference to ~but girlfriend~ is a good warning. Enjoyed your take on this subject. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (03-10-2003 08:02 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Pretty ink is so YOU~ Just like a goddess! Nice write Michele~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Nice exposé Mish and brilliantly written |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
You got me to chuckle and a chuckle and a chuckle again. Its nice to see your sense of humor shine. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
These dreams die hard, you silly bard, beware the night of the net You must recall to love at all, it’s better when you’ve met. I did a similar themed poem some time ago. We just never know on the 'net. Great job. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Michele, you're one smart lady!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Loved this Michele - nice job - leave em guessing . . . xxoo |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this made me grin a bit.. because I completely understand all your saying. And know of people who have had bad experiences with meeting people, and so many who just think the internet is an easy way to lie and cheat. But it made me grin ebcause I'm meeting a family in a month that I've known very well, for a year. love this poem, still, holds true so often. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
LOL yes and many come on to play while their wife is away Hope |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
oh yes, i too confess, ive been both player and playee |
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