Open Poetry #25 |
Longing |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I long for you To be with me again When you are gone It feels like something is missing I long to feel your lips on mine To feel your body as you hold me tight I long to look into your handsome eyes of brown And see that cute half smile I long to be in your arms And feel your strong muscles I long to look at your handsome face Especially when I wake up every morning I am longing for you And the love you so tenderly give me Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... I enjoyed |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What you long for...longs for you. Or as Rumi said - "This longing you express is the return message." Beautiful. Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - and you shall have your longing, nice write... BC |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
That reminds me of us Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed this... many thing we miss when we are away from the ones we care about.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) And soon you will get all you desire, sweet friend, for you have someone here who loves you so very much and longs for you the same and shares this mutual understanding! (big hugggssssss) I too hope you and Liam are together soon, I send angel hus of hope your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, it hurts too |
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