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mpt Junior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 32australia |
i had a very strange dream with an alligator which was trying to eat me, and it bit me, but couldnt actually penetrate my skin with its teeth. its also strange because i live in australia where we have crocodiles...but heres what i wrote when i woke up the alligator stalks a foreign enemy in native surroundings poised to pounce, daring to devour impatient strike, consequent failure or success, masked to save the victim from insanity? Though dreams can be deceiving |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a cool poem.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
different... |
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