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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Preset Subliminal symbols play. Like passing ants on any day. To and from the hive they go Like the pull of an under toe Driven by a primal urge They hurry in a march of dirge Life and death is on the run Charging like Attila the Hun. There’s nothing else that they would be The same I think as you and me. Yet do not question of their vend They seek no special fitting ends. It is a lesson by all means. A lesson given in our genes Factor in the power of God And it does not seem so odd. So maybe why is not for let Maybe it is all preset. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice, But isn’t that undertow? Or are you trying for a different meaning? Well-crafted as usual Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ants frighten me to no end, not because they bite, but because they are so damned ORGANIZED they intimidate me. *shudder* Loved the view of the world, and your wisdom looking at the wee universe... and yep, alert and thinking here. (Y'caught me on the THIRD cup o coffee.) Allow me to illustrate: serenity on 3 cups o java--->  4 cups--->  5 cups--->  gonna quit after this'n I think. Mornin' lovie.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, My spell check didn't catch it, LOL Thank you serenity, I guess 3 cups are your limit. LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 tell me when this starts to bug ya  LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Is NOW too soon? TUBULAR FOOD...ARGGGGHHHH...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
  So are you trying to tell me ya got ants in your pants and youre itching to dance? Well lets bug-boogie baby LOL  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hmmm...think I'll wear something more easy-access today... bwahahaha... (um...yep. somebody left the gate open today! ) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) So much is preset and predetermined, but I also believe He predetermined freedom also, and that is how we are all unique and keep dancing with all the other ants! (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 I think that guy is the Uncle..not the Ant. wakka wakka LOL  Aint he cute? I think I'll name him Randy |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very nice poem . But janet, you got some issues.  Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
[email protected] do ya know baby... a ha ha.... *wink* and I think I'll give sy back his thread now...grin |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ants...and termites! YeGods... when DO you come up with this stuff?  Good morning, Sy-guy! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OHMYGOSH! SY! Something or some things have taken over your post!  Well...between your wonderful words this ayem and Serenity and Janet Marie... my morning is off to a smiling start! *Think I'll stick to my tea though* ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ...excuse me think I have an itch!!  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, thanks for another write of wisdom, this morning. I enjoyed as always.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Love your flood of responses, you make me smile, you make me laugh, you are my raft. Shall we float away????? serenity, Well I can see you got up on the right side of the bed. LOL Thank you love. Noah, Your entitled. LOL Thank you. Connel Issues and tissues, LOL thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I think everything should have a say. Nancy, Would you like me to scratch it, LOL Hugs. Ethel, Thank you sweet, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Gee whiz....what has happened here this morning. Your poem was wonderful as always, and then little leggy things started crawling all over my screen! I think we will skip the honey and toast just to be on the safe side and wait till lunch!! quick hug and a scratch, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, Sy...Thanks for this first read of my morning.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Everyone was in a good frame of mind and I see you are too. Martie, Your replies are my mental candy. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 damn! good! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
hehehe..thought I'd start at the bottom of the page since I haven't been able to read for awhile...soooooooo glad I didn't miss this one, and the comments----whoops, there goes another rubber tree!!!!!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandpiper Ya isnt it terrible. LOL Thank you. |
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