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My rising sun
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My rising sun |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Quietly I contemplate the beauty of You, in the silence of my soul, in the radiance of the day in the clouds shaped as blossoms of white. My desire calls forth A sphere of light born in my heart, growing and glowing, tenderly enfolding me, you shine so bright. I close my eyes and find you dancing, on my inner screen heavenly tunes you sing and I step into a dream sparkles you and me. Across the nightly sky we play among the stars you are my smiling moon, so sweet your touch of love, in the splendor of dawn, you are my rising sun. Love, Margherita |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Across the nightly sky we play among the stars you are my smiling moon, so sweet your touch of love, in the splendor of dawn, you are my rising sun. WOW!!! omg this is soooo beautifully written. I love how you have played the words and fashioned them all together into a sort of love song. Awesome!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful....much enjoyed! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Very lovely. Enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Across the nightly sky we play among the stars you are my smiling moon, so sweet your touch of love, in the splendor of dawn, you are my rising sun. ======================= goodness...someone inspires lovely thing in you poetess Margherita..wonderful declaration of heart wrapped in surreal imagery. well done. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - your words are touching, romantic they are... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a nice thought, my smiling moon. Your poem was pleasing to the eye~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Margerita, this is sooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, yay, and may the sun always rise and glow upon your golden heart with smiles, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I find poems that have bits of nature woven through them, add to my pleasure of reading them. Such was the case with this lovely one that you have written! Warm hugs, EA |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
a stunning and beautiful piece Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Margherita, this is so beautiful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, with your loving presence on this thread you add beams of light to this Saturday morning. I am always powerfully attracted to immerse in Universe's vastness ... on waves of love! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"You are my rising sun." very nice...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How beautiful, Margherita....just perfect. I love it....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is just lovely - I love your writing: Across the nightly sky we play among the stars you are my smiling moon, so sweet your touch of love, in the splendor of dawn, you are my rising sun. xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my friends for "coming in" and for the loving comments. May the sun rise beautifully for all of you today. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Soft, gentle--whispers--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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