Open Poetry #25 |
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Retreating |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn ![]() |
Though I belong to no church, I find myself contemplating spending time with some nearby Trappists. Those that know me, don’t find this……….extraordinary Can a man Who possesses No religiosity But, has ever attempted To acquire spirituality Come away from Trappist trappings Any richer? Can a man Who prides himself On his vocabulary But has never Actually said anything Come away from Cistercian silence With the ability To speak? And finally, Can a man Who has lately lived Lacking creature comfort And certainly wanting For any comfort creature Come away from A monastic retreat Any less austere? |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Ed... and many years ago..I too considered just the same. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed - ok I may be off but here goes: (forgive me if I am off - correct me if I am please) the first: yes - you already are rich the second: more insightful (if that is possible with you lol) third: an enigma only you will resolve by looking within Have me thinkin here always - this is amazing xxoo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
(I always found monks kinda sexy m'self.) I think it has to do with artistry, and the self being the ultimate canvas. and nothing about your gentle grace surprises me. ![]() You have the wisdom of discernment m'friend. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I came back to say...I was a little shy about saying everything I wanted to say about this. I am awkward about such things, as ya know. But I think often, about the need to put back, what we take out. (GIGO--Garbage In--Garbage Out) I say often, that even Jesus the Christed, took time away from his chosen apostles to pray, meditate, and renew. How can we of such simple understanding choose less? I use the analogy of a battery often---that we must emit and receive in constancy, and it is when we fail to achieve this that causes our imbalances.... and yes, it is cliche' by now to cite that the word "atonement" means "at-one-ment"-- and disease can be equated with un-ease... but even if all of the above philosophies are incorrect? At least I have the option to choose to die happy.... and oooh, ya make me dig deep m'yeti.... love you. ![]() |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ed this reminds me of Hesse's Siddhartha, where the protaganist leaves hinduism when he no longer finds solace in it, he joins ascetics in the forest until again it no longer suits him, he turns his back on spirituality to emerse himself in material to see if that would make him happy it does not, he even walks with the buddha himself but again finds no solace. Buddha, Jesus etc..they had to create their own paths when following no longer suited them. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
http://www.online-literature.com/hesse/siddhartha/ For anyone who's curious..god Ed always get me thinking.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wranx--To question is a good thing...and there are many paths to self discovery..and they all lead to some place else. The way of your thinking refreshes my tired mind. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thanks Ron. And I coulda guessed. Karen, my witch. thank you and thank you. The worst case, is plenty of "Trappist" beer and....uh...fruitcake. Raff? If I'd known that someone already walked this path, I'd have saved some time. Sheesh. Not a riddle, Sue. At least, not for anyone but me. Oops! Maybe it is. Marti, The reason for this, would be for that kind of refreshment. Plus the beer and fruitcake. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are deep in richness, in more ways then one.....I, too, find myself thinking beyond realms....its all good....hugsss you Lauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hehehe Ed - Im learning . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
.....wow |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Heh-heh.... the answers are: Yes, Yes, and Decidedly Yes. On the other hand, I find most things about you....extraordinary ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (03-13-2003 12:10 AM).] |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
*pondering* excellent job...I love when I'm made to think! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Just come back to us afterwards, OK? |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Wranx, your writing is amazing.........it makes me feel.......shallow.And your vocab, sends me running for definitions.You are truly one of my forum favorites. Jason |
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