Open Poetry #25 |
April's Dance |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
April's Dance The air is clean and fresh as spring, the rain has washed it so. The grass is green, with rain drops bright, they glisten as I go. My heart is light, my soul refreshed, my steps are fetter-free; would you enjoy a walk my friend? Then come along with me! We'll tiptoe through the tulip beds, careful of the bugs, those ladies do a mighty work unlike those oozy slugs. Butterflies and buzzing bees flit and float above the gleaming blooms. The maiden finch, give inch by inch, to the sweetest, courting grooms. It's spring time in the north, April is clicking off its days. Flora and fauna are dancing in sun's rays. Let us join the happy throng, let us twitter hearts and sing. We'll pirouette beneath the sun and croon of lovely spring. ©April 11, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Awesome. This is just the way I feel about Spring. You write and express yourself very well. Jesus lives in my heart! |
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LUV_R_GIRL2379 Junior Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 42 |
Very nice! i loved it! i can just see the sights of spring when reading this! keep up the good work! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This is awesome!!! I loved the feeling in this!! Totally uplifted my day! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, this makes me just a little homesick, as I was born and raised in Oregon....but English Springs are identical, so it fits the surroundings here, too!! Loved it, and now I think I will go out and play in my garden!!!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice spring in your steps! I can smell the fresh Oregon air with each line. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed the walk along with you...we don't exactly get Spring in my country... |
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