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Angels Song
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Angels Song |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
There was a girl who wanted to sing to hear her voice from on stage ring a pure, sweet, innocent child with calm green eyes and a heart still wild she had a voice, soft as the wind sheer talent, straight from within she was only sixteen, still just a kid yet contractors, for her voice bid she finally got her chance one night an audition, on stage, she felt no fright she won it easy, clean and clear they signed her up, then and there driving home, feeling elated, no one knew what was fated, a terrible tragedy happened that night death struck out with all its might it claimed another innocent so much future left unspent her family, torn with pain a quiet funeral in the rain yet shes not gone, no way no how she simply an angel, with god now the angel with the most beautiful voice we hear her sing, and we rejoice shes gone from us but still she sings no stage, but her voice rings in our lives and in our hearts, where one joy ends, another starts |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
geez...sad but beautiful! I love those kinds! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Exceptionally moving...  But the ending was up-lifting and joyous! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Little_One Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 34montana |
Beautiful Robbie....Just Beautiful Love always and forever Kristin |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Quite sad yet very beautifully told. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
oh man... :'( loved this..so moving ;_; I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
wonderful emotions tied up in the old adage of gone but never forgotten. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
My 12 year old daughter selected your poem as one she wanted me to read to her. I cannot begin to tell you how much this moved her. It is so difficult to see a young life taken. I am a substitute teacher at 2 high schools, and I have seen the greatness of our youth. It is the most uplifting experience to be in the classroom with talented, intelligent youngsters. I think they teach me more than I could ever teach them. Thank you for your beautiful words. -Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rob: yet shes not gone, no way no how she simply an angel, beautiful tribute - you know I love the angels This is lovely xxoo |
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