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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-03-09 03:32 AM

That  I had fallen
    silhouette beneath the moon
silence broken
        echo’s of you
between light, & darkness;
tranquility
naked
           the easel
colors                 canvas

Picasso        ishaunting
     my dreams;

Midnight writes            poetry

I wear     your     language,
     words from  heart
slowly        like November rain
without you
lost

     love   bending rivers

empty

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

1 posted 2003-03-09 03:38 AM

good write, I too have those midnight poetry sessions, although mine keep me up to 3:30 sometimes

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-03-09 08:55 AM

Lauren,

I like this a great deal.

I especially like the image of:

"Picasso is haunting my dreams"

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-03-09 09:16 AM

Very lovely Lauren..much enjoyed the feel of this piece.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

sperarifraai
Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 65
Ireland

4 posted 2003-03-09 09:27 AM

One of my favourites, very haunting

Sperari

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-03-09 10:31 AM

I felt ache in this, beautifully written as always..Dali haunts mine..speaking of artists a belated happy birthday to Michelangelo sorry Mikey

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-03-09 11:40 AM

Aching in this one...November is indeed a chilling month, and even when Picasso imagery fragments me, I still go back for more.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-03-09 11:44 AM

...Midnight writes poetry...

aye,
and so does the dawn...

beautiful beautiful!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2003-03-09 11:58 AM

That  I had fallen
    silhouette beneath the moon
silence broken
        echo’s of you
between light, & darkness;
tranquility
naked
           the easel
colors                 canvas

Picasso        ishaunting
     my dreams;

Midnight writes            poetry

====================================

"Midnight writes poetry" and time after time, Lauren writes me mothy heart.
And I am ever grateful to be able to read her lovely, exquisite, heart on sleeve poetry. Perfect me sweet butterfly sister.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2003-03-10 05:59 AM

I wear     your     language,
     words from  heart
slowly        like November rain
without you
lost

     love   bending rivers

empty
and I am supposed to say something meaningful here... (laughing)... how do I say anything about lines like those...except to trot out the usual lines of exceptional...and well done??

If I ever learn to write poetry...I want it indeed to be like this.... moving...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-03-10 09:01 AM

(sigh) Oh Lauren, this is so very beautiful, sweet friend, I wish for the beauty of love to always shine in your heart and for the leaves to always drip with honey in the fall and be green with birds chirping all the rest of the year, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2003-03-10 09:15 AM

Greeneyes
What can I add except, pretty. Hugs

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-03-10 09:18 AM

Lauren, beautiful, as is all your work.

Hugs,
Ethel

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

13 posted 2003-03-10 11:52 AM

Rivers of Midnight writes do blend,
    running like water colors ...
        tears of many seasons.

       Truly a heartfelt write.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

14 posted 2003-03-10 05:21 PM

Both very beautiful and sad, my friend. Hugs to you.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

15 posted 2003-03-10 08:27 PM

My favorite part was the bend in the river,
not to mention the emptiness that leaves a heart drained.

You always write so nice Lauren~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2003-03-10 09:07 PM

enjoyed

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

17 posted 2003-03-10 10:28 PM

Lauren, I hope you don't mind me giving this a bump, because I consider it some of your best writing and want more readers to have a chance of seeing the beauty of your pen. Hugs and love, dear friend.

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