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Open Poetry #25

Safe

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

0 posted 2003-03-10 01:57 PM

I want to feel safe
god I long for peace
I want to feel happy
wipe away tears for good

I want a real smile
to escape from my lips
too feel kid like again
to never worry or fret

What happened to the days
where my biggest worries were
if my blocks were going to fall
tumbling down my castle so tall

Is there really a break from
this adult life i dreamed of
is my final resting place really
the only break I'll ever get

For now I'll imagine
and rely on memory
to give me a breather
and feel like a child

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-10 03:12 PM

Kristie - yes - to see through the eyes of a child again - oh how I wish . . . amazing write - xxoo

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-03-10 05:17 PM

Beautiful!
Eric

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2003-03-10 10:48 PM

Safe....peace I too long for that.... we may find our own peace but will we ever feel safe....heart hugs, I indeed felt the longing in this....

Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

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