Open Poetry #25 |
Light A Candle Once More? |
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Light A Candle Once More? Here I am, once again holding dried rose petals spending my day thinking about you. Though the sweet scent of the rose vanished long ago, remembrance of a soft touch lingers, and as I lightly rub the petals with my fingertips once more, I’m wrapped up in your love and I smile, remembering how I gazed at you from my window as you picked those beautiful red roses and I can still see the smile on your face as you walked through the door. In an instant I knew I was completely in love. Guess I sound like a hopeless romantic but as I count the steps I’ve taken since then I know, everything’s alright and like a timeless romantic ballad I won’t stop loving you, because I believe a love like this so beautiful in every way is meant to stay, so why should I try to stop loving you? If we turned out the light and lit a candle would love grow? I don’t know, so for now I’ll drink this glass of wine and pretend BloomingRose [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (03-08-2003 07:59 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't forget to light the candle... this glows, Deb... it's so good to see you back in the blue pages... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you so much... miss you all too. Hugs, Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Debra, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I too dream of love all the time only now it is so heartaching ever since I don't have my sweetheart anymore! (sad sigh) May these memories always sing to your heart dearly, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wine combines beautifully with candles .... Beautiful write. Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A soft and romantic write. Enjoyed. Welcome back BloomingRose! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my I missed your writing Deb, and this romantic little ditty is why! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BloomingRose - a romantic you are indeed, especially with these tender words... BC |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
One of the most romantic poems I've read in my |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very nice! I really did enjoy this one. Im adding it to my lib. Thanks for posting it. Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very beautiful! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Love's memories are precious....well done Deb. Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
All you wonderful people are very generous with your warm replies. Thank you! I hope to spend time tomorrow doing some reading here in the blue pages. Hugs, Deb |
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