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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
Coffee Bitter coffee, with some sugar, tastes like something When you have someone missing. The wind across the Pacific Ocean is suddenly shaking Aeolian bells at the front door which , of course, is ringing. Bitter winter is freezing up this white wandering Deep inside, beautiful feeling is growing. Who can really tell where it's going Leave it to the wind far away carrying. Translated on March 8, 2003 ========== |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am so pleased you can communicate with us, Laoha...it sounds as if your coffee times give a sense of ponderence...which is good for us all... thank you! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
enjoyed muchly! welcome! :-) |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
You all are great, thank you! I am learning to write poetry in English. As a start, I'll translate some poems of mine, as well as some other Chinese poets, into English. Some grammatic mistakes will show up from time to time, please feel free to point them out, that way I will be able to improve. A peaceful mind leaded by a clear vision |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Laoha - another lovely write: The wind across the Pacific Ocean is suddenly shaking Ohh to just feel that wind again - would be Heaven - and yes "Bitter coffee, with some sugar, tastes like something When you have someone missing." So very true - so very heartfelt - I love your new perspective xxoo |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Nice! Should into book. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Bitter winter is freezing up this white wandering Deep inside, beautiful feeling is growing. Who can really tell where it's going Leave it to the wind far away carrying. I absolutely love this verse. says so much. Hope that beautiful feeling goes where you want it to. adding this to my library. Maree  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Deep inside, beautiful feeling is growing." A lovely line...enjoyed...James |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Laoha, this is a very pretty poem with lots of truth in it. I really enjoyed it. Thank you very much for sharing it with us. Heart Hugs  Ethel |
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