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Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

0 posted 2003-03-03 09:44 PM

Inside my head,
A blank sheet of white,
The lines run across,
Upon them I write.
That's where they are,
In this place they shall be,
Buried away,
For no one to see.

Inside my head,
All scrambled, unattached,
Like a puzzle, a jigsaw,
Until evenly matched.
A feeling of love,
Lost lovers or rage,
All set upon,
The lines on my page.

Inside my head,
My words may supply,
Deep inspiration,
To touch others lives.
So the words in my head,
I pull them from there,
And set them down here,
For others to share.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-03 09:53 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Albert, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this made me smile as your words truly inspire me as I know they do others too! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I have missed you the past week or so, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-03-03 09:53 PM

Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

3 posted 2003-03-03 10:01 PM

Thank you NOAH

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

4 posted 2003-03-03 10:01 PM

Thanks again Loner

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-03-03 10:24 PM

Very well done!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

6 posted 2003-03-03 10:27 PM

Thanks enchantress

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-04 12:10 PM

Albert, this is well done. I like it...

Hugs,
Ethel

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

8 posted 2003-03-04 12:11 PM

Excellent write.
Jason

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

9 posted 2003-03-04 12:23 PM

THANK YOU Garysgrl!!

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

10 posted 2003-03-04 12:23 PM

Thank you Jason

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-03-04 03:16 AM

thank you for sharing

rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

12 posted 2003-03-04 03:18 AM

it's great how people can make empty pages come alive

Phantom Poet
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since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

13 posted 2003-03-04 04:37 AM

good thoughts
>>phantom poet<<

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2003-03-04 04:58 AM

Albert - I have always longed to write about writing - you have done it for me with your words so true to my own heart - xxoo

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

15 posted 2003-03-04 09:37 AM

nicely done...

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

16 posted 2003-03-04 05:37 PM

Thank you Shadow!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

17 posted 2003-03-04 05:38 PM

Thanks RK and Phantom

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

18 posted 2003-03-04 05:39 PM

Little wing....A pleasure to be able to help!

CPAT! THANK YOU

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

19 posted 2003-03-04 11:27 PM

I loved this!!!! The flow was awesome...I've never been able to create a satisfying poem about writing. You did this extremely well!
~hugs!!!~

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

20 posted 2003-03-05 03:52 AM

This definitely gets a check in the submit box!!!! You captured what all of us here feel, the stuff inside our heads. But the most important part is the sharing...as what we share may be just what a reader needs to put a smile in his/her heart!! There are many poets here, but many more readers!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

21 posted 2003-03-05 06:34 PM

THANK YOU KOKO Always a pleasure

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

22 posted 2003-03-05 06:35 PM

Thank you Sunny. So true! People have told me I have touched their hearts through my words. I love to be able to lift someone up through my writing. Feels good!

Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

23 posted 2003-03-17 06:08 PM

made me smile *s

[This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (03-17-2003 06:13 PM).]

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

24 posted 2003-03-17 08:32 PM

Thanks Alice!!!!

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

25 posted 2003-03-17 10:36 PM

Enjoyed this read, it gets my vote.

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

26 posted 2003-03-18 07:03 AM

Thanks white rose!!!!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

27 posted 2003-03-19 08:58 AM

Thanks for pulling so many fine words from your head and laying them down so graciously on this sea of blue for us! Thanks for sharing!

Peace & Light,
EA

Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

28 posted 2003-03-19 09:00 AM

Very Nice
I truly did enjoy this piece
Thomas

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

29 posted 2003-03-19 05:12 PM

Thanks Earth Angel!!!!
ANYTIME....

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

30 posted 2003-03-19 05:12 PM

Thanks Thomas!!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

31 posted 2003-03-20 09:44 AM

I'm glad you did. *S* I enjoyed!! *S*

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

32 posted 2003-03-20 06:11 PM

Thanks Sutnrn!!!!!!!!!!

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