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We Dine On Our Love (A Three Course Affair)
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We Dine On Our Love (A Three Course Affair) |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 As the day closes its door With the approaching of night I find myself alone with you In front of the firelight Staring at the embers Into the glorious golden heat Your hands work their magic As they caress my tired feet The aroma of jasmine Creates a sensual mood Red wine and our love There's no need for real food We dine on our love It's a three course affair As love takes full control Into your eyes I stare Entree is now served Filled with passion from your kiss s I start to melt like chocolate From this moment of bliss Main course has many surprises Filled with love and deep desire Like a slowly burning ember Without a match you light my fire Dessert will be the climas For we are both so eager to please As we consume each tasty morsel Love brings us to our knees So satisfying was this feast But there's one thing I'd like to know If I tip the waiter handsomely Can I have three courses to go? I am in motion |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
The imagery is beautiful Sue. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the ending! great piece! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue..and a great ending!! ~Hugs and Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, this is sooooooo sensually beautiful, I always just love reading your love poetry, you truly should publish your works so you can start a love library, yay, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Tips are good...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I often pass by poems with pictures -- my loss, I'm beginning to think! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this one is very sensual. My vote is in...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'll send some Canadian loonies and toonies for some of that fine dining fare.  This poem was a feast for both the eyes and the palette---as well as for the soul! Love & Light, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was entranced through the poem... and LMAO at the ending... Yes! *G* |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Another beautiful poem Sue, with a lovely twist that made me laugh  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue hahahaha loved this - made me smile you did xxoo |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh Sue.... This is so beautiful... I'd like 3 courses too!! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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