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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Squinting into the light the wind upon my face I laughed today at nothing in particular at all the utter absurdity of this whatever this is the sun has come too early for me I'm not ready just yet this tired song still plays in my head and I've failed to see where needle skips So I'll submerge, to find my selves And sigh I know I'll hear the cry of angel relentless for she sees not the piles of canary bone and rusted cage from all who've tried before |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sheer genius! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
At times the sun is blinding, but you saw yourself mirrored and couldn't believe it! Beautiful! Un abbraccio Margherita |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Really liked this one! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This time this angel has real wings - sleep a sweet dream and return renewed my dear friend - for life is waiting for you to drop in your coin and ride - as always amazing me still . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-24-2003 06:57 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, this is beautiful to me. I read it, then read it again, then read it again...... each time getting something from it that I didn't get before. I love it when you write about the Angels. That's all I'm going to say now, because I don't want to reveal too much of what is coming through your writings. Do you realize yourself, dear friend? Thank you, Ralphy, for sharing the feelings of your heart with us.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
for she sees not the piles of canary bone and rusted cage from all who've tried before warning signs are often not heeded... especially if blinded... noce work raph.. as always.. I pleasure to read you.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is one I would enjoy hearing you read aloud! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Chilling and impression-leaving. Quite the emotive imagery and idea. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
I love it, it's beautiful. Warm hugs, Etain. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
she offered you yellow feathers, her gift of song, not wanted to stay, preferring the ravens colors, she just became a shadow, sent to fly away............   [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-25-2003 07:13 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I read this twice...and then once more. beautiful write Raph...I like it when you write about angels. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal Well done, enjoyed. |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
Wow... *To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Raphael...my archangel of the fourth corner, I hope you know how truly extraordinary this is---you make me regret my absence more than you know. Ya just blew me outta the water. astounding work you... (have missed you, lovie--) hope you are well? Drop you an e later...   |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
hauntingly resound |
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