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Open Poetry #25

From The Outside

sperarifraai
Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 65
Ireland

0 posted 2003-03-06 01:10 PM

Blank stupid fall
Green outside
Crosses on walls
Bored for life

Acquired a taste
And hasten to stay
Too familiar that
It plunges me down
And I can’t remain the same
And it’s a jail
A perpetual madness
I hate when I anger
And try to sleep through this

What to do
What to do
Never knew my options
I’ve got to get some failures
A drainy street
The rain, the sun
The world turns
In it’s perpetual axis
And all I do is ask it
Again upon again
No answers just heat
No answers just snow
It would be bleak
If there was not time to meet

Half a dozen dreams or so
Rolling down the street
Each one as deluded
As the next dream he shall meet
Their veins they flow with poison
They crawl with their own deceit
As half a dozen dreams or so
Stumble backwards up the street

Look from the outside in
Insignificance demands delusion

Sperari

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2003-03-06 02:23 PM

Hey. I never got the chance to welcome you to passions. My names Joe.

Well, you are not alone when you say that you are still seeking your own voice.. because I too am still seeking my own voice.

Reading this tells me that you and I carry a number of things in common. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Cheers.

-Joe

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

[This message has been edited by EagleScorpion (03-06-2003 02:23 PM).]

sperarifraai
Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 65
Ireland

2 posted 2003-03-06 02:24 PM

Thanks Joe,

Look forward to reading your work!

Sperari

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