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Dark Moment
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Dark Moment |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
################################## Looking For The Screen Waiting For The Singh Of My Love As Always Before The Eyes Going To The Dark Waiting For The Kiss Of Good Night Getting The Hug Of The Warm And Having the Sweet Encouraging words To Be Ready For The Hard Day Of Work I Found My self In This Dark moments With My Trembles Body I Didn't Get The Warm That Help Me to Be A live I Closed My Eyes To Find The Answers Finally I get the Darks A round Me My Smile Decreased And In This Dark Moment I Lived My Life For A short Distance The Way Of the Answers Wasn't Clear Enough To My Soul So I Decided To Back A gain to my Dark Moment Wondering And Wondering How And Why..... ################################## You Are My End Secret Life... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes the dark is just more soothing and makes more sense for while, it comes in cycles at times |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For A short Distance The Way Of the Answers Wasn't Clear Enough To My Soul I really think this is wonderful phrasing. *s M |
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Night Shadow Junior Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 41 |
Wonderfull and so nice, I really Love it and can feel it. great feeling... Huggggggggggggggggs  Sam!! |
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prof.pishnu Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 21 |
ahh dark moments i have a few o them. easy to relate to. You have done a good piece of writiing really refreshing to know im not strange  |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thanx alot every one I am happy for your cute replies.... I am really glad for that Hugsssssssss to all Secretlife |
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