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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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Lost Desolate I am this has become obvious No sign of anyone The only tracks that I can find seem to be mine in a circle I have gone What must I be doing wrong? Lost within myself and this God forsaken land Water and food to eat But no company to keep ghost my memories have become long the days feel to me soon only third person speech so I may have someone to whom I my speak giggles erupt I am obscured and out of the way Who will come to save me? from my wandering ways am I damned to repeat these mistakes? Redemption seems the way a path paved with good intentions will lead right OR will I be warmed by Hells fire this night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thomas, Difficult to says what symbols will return in the night. Enjoyed the read. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thomas - God I know how you feel - excellent xxoo |
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Ladies_Rogue New Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 7Mississippi |
Tom you were right This web site is cool Love your poem Henry |
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