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To know you
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To know you |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Theres no depth without your skinned torso in spotlight to see what really is inside? Examine and dissect my pre concieved beliefs that spread thru brain like rapid rash itching my nerves All i know remains the same my vision blinfolded in humorous game? and i scratch to find the middle All that my vision wipes clean blood stained memory i want to know you inside out. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop Interesting write, enjoyed. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, is everything okay, or are you just writing deeper poetry nowadays.....  Whatever you're feeling has got you writing some really deep poetry. It's making me think, and that's a good thing....  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If you keep scratching like that, you will reach his essence. I hope he is worthy of your scratches! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thanks for the replies, as ever they mean a lot.  Ethel mae,  yes i'm totally fine friend, don't worry. dont let my moody poetry fool you! i'm still happy! i know, its about time i wrote somethings slushy isn't it. i've missed you yet again. been having computer problems, need a new one! never gonnna happen.speak to you soon friend, think i'll go and check out your poems i've missed out on. xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem - I want to know you - inside and out - amazing - liked this a lot - xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gemma, a fine write from you, I enjoyed the read tonight |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes inside out outside in, this sounds like a Yessong, but, its true, only way to truly love, take the bad with the good, or just have lots of love affairs, which personally, i prefer these days |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
lol @ Michele - sorry |
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