Open Poetry #25 |
Ghosts of winter |
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Frosted eyes were fading, with the fog that covered all, all blanketed in silver, through which I've heard those voices call, the darkened skies of night, softly layed with raven's wings, on snow covered grounds of winter, their forgotten voices sing I've seen them walking silently, eyes cast toward the ground, they search for something aimlessly, that which never will be found. |
||
© Copyright 2003 Liz - All Rights Reserved | |||
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hello Wind !! This is truly a very good write. Enjoyed it this wintery evening. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
||
Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
WIND!!! Welcome back !.. Oh my goodness, you have been gone so long! I missed you so much.. Ohhhh.. *Hugs Wind* Im so glad your back! Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
||
Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Connel- You havent noticed me replying to your posts? Nightshade- thanks, You write beautifully to Julie- Thats sweet. Thanks |
||
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Wind - this is amazing: the darkened skies of night, softly layed with raven's wings, liked this one xxoo |
||
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful, Liz. I like. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
||
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
all blanketed in silver, through which I've heard those voices call, the darkened skies of night, softly layed with raven's wings, =========================== wonderful use of imagery and color to create the starkness of winter in this surreal write. Well done poetess Wind |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good imagery here Liz...what a beautiful mind you have |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |