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New Beginning
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New Beginning |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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An adventure is starting one step at a time, the first one taken, you have a lot on your mind. The anxiety you feel in the good times and bad, and confusing are feeling both happy and sad. Dreams coming true might be hard to take in, and no one deserves it more, than you my friend You who possess the strength and confidence to be all you can be, An inspiring soul for all to see. As you step down the road step hard, fast and true, On wings of the angels our prayers are with you. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely but you didn't hit the button to submit. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Great write, please go back and open it up for votes. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I agree....we want YOU in the book!!!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
By request I edited this to accept votes. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh JP, I am so happy you edited this so I can vote, sweet friend, now I am aware of this and want to devote my life to helping as many as I can and singing out loud when I before almost not let myself go on! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet JP, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*CLICK*  |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
very good points >>phantom poet<< |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wise words, JP... Glad you edited...  |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such a wonderful poem, thank you for sharing  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have a big and loving heart and you may use my "wings" to deliver the prayers... Warm hugs for a warm heart, Earth Angel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
JP - this is absolutely beautiful - especially the part about the wings hehehe xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn, that's good |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
JP. this is a wonderful book submission... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
that first step is a hard step ~A~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Yes, it's always hardest to take that first step. Nicely done. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
My vote, nice one JP Jason |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good, I'm back to vote... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice and encouraging piece.... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
You who possess the strength and confidence to be all you can be, *nodding my head enthusiastically* Right on! When you think you have heard it all, |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
As you step down the road step hard, fast and true, On wings of the angels our prayers are with you *** Very meaningful and timely JP. I like this. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and you are an encouraging friend yourself |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
JP, This poem has many layers I believe, but tonight I just have to believe that it is a prayer for our soldiers as they go bravely into this war, proud to be fighting for their country. Great poem. Dawn |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Someone is lucky to have such a supportive friend. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Nice "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
OK now I get to vote. Joyce |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
My vote is in Charisma |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To me this is a story for one on the recovery road. You told it well. Now why am I not getting a vote box? Hmmm... Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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