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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-03-22 06:55 PM


TWENTY OR LESS...#110

Copyright 2003 by:  MARK V SHELDON


passion negates purity

such need
for the unattainable

enlightened but ignorant

innocent searching


intense enormity found


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http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-03-22 07:02 PM


YES!! YES!!  YES!!
Welcome home to the King of the Twenty or Less!!
YOU have been missed....
and this one I love!
*well..you know I love them all*
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2003-03-22 07:03 PM




(sigh) Wow, this is powerful, dearest friend, this makes me wonder if it is better to be innocent or passionate, sadly enormity can come from either way I think! (sad sigh) This is powerful, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-03-22 07:12 PM


ah hah~~ passions need be,  in twenty or less.
Wish I knew how to narrow it down that well.

Nice~

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-03-22 07:25 PM


ah missed seeing these, glad you're back
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5 posted 2003-03-22 08:40 PM


Appreciate your words, Mark.
Sandra

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6 posted 2003-03-22 08:48 PM


Mark, glad to see you here.
I really missed these. They
are all good.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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Gaia
7 posted 2003-03-22 10:34 PM


"passion negates purity"


this time, I disagree

pure passion flows from your pen...

nothing negative about that


wranx
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8 posted 2003-03-23 01:53 AM


Twenty or less, but deep as all get out.
Damn!

"The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable"

~Bukowski~

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-03-23 07:15 AM


Life is passion
.... and when innocence is not lost along the way, PASSION GROWS to limitless heights.
In my opinion these two ingredients make life TRUE LIFE.
Beautiful and - as you see - thought provoking.
Love, Margherita

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2003-03-23 10:00 AM


Aw, Nancy...   You humble me.  Thank you so much.  There's no place like home, you know...

Noah, I'd have to say that striking a balance between the two is the key...

BluesSerenade:  a passionate thank you!

Thanks, Raph...  it's fun prodding thought again.

And I appreciate you, Sandra...  thank you.

Hi Ethyl.  Thank you for the read and mention -- I'm glad you enjoy this series.

Kacy...  it doesn't always flow, but thank you so much for disagreeing!

Ed...  with poets like yourself to inspire me, I am honored.  Thank you for stopping by.

Margherita, I have to say that you have "discovered the answer" in my book...  You put it perfectly, and I agree with you.  I'm always happy to provoke...  

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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