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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-03-20 04:36 PM




You call to me.
Soft...as the voice of the nights
own whisper.

I turn to you...and meet
your lips -

With a whisper of my own.



© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-03-20 05:14 PM


Eric, this is so pretty.
I really like it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-03-20 05:20 PM


Like the feelings this embraces...James
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2003-03-20 05:23 PM


This is delicate and lovely.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

cinnamongirl
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4 posted 2003-03-20 06:21 PM


Pure sensual beauty... delicate, sweet love.

Wow... thank you for such poetic magic.

Love,
Moca

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5 posted 2003-03-20 07:29 PM


WOW!!!  Love this Eric!
~Hugs~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-03-20 08:20 PM


This poem was as soft as a whispered kiss...

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

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7 posted 2003-03-22 08:27 PM




(smiles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, and may true love always whisper to your heart with truth and faithfulness! (sigh) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Margherita
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8 posted 2003-03-23 07:56 AM


Whispers melting upon a kiss.
Stirring and peaceful at the same time.
Sweetness and passion go hand in hand.
Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2003-03-23 08:25 AM


        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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