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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-03-05 12:19 PM

Is it something, nothing, or everything about you
That draws my tongue to yours?
Is it that dream I keep having of you
The one where the winter wind is whipping around me
And then I see your face and you make me warm again?
Is it the purple skies that outline your blond,flowing hair
That makes you glisten?
Is it that waking kiss in the morning
That sets off my whole day thinking about you?
Are you some sort of sweet fruit
And that is why I crave for your taste?
Just what is it about you
That made me comfortable
Straight from the first moment you opened your cherry-lipped mouth?
Is it the scent you leave upon me
That finds its way to my nose
Whenever I'm thinking about you?
What is it?
Is it everything, something, or nothing
That draws my soul to yours?

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-05 02:17 AM

Ko-Ko - I love this - I ask myself that same thing - sometimes you just know that connection - no words . . . xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-03-05 02:48 AM

loved the way you wrote it out

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2003-03-05 02:49 AM

Thanks KoKo.. I had been attempting to understand a situation I am in, and I believe you have just given me the counsel I sought... Very good work.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2003-03-05 03:29 AM

Ah, Koko, I agree...that something is really hard to define!! Stealing kisses from my man is a favorite hobby of mine...great poem!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

5 posted 2003-03-05 10:37 PM

littlewing: You're extremely right! Thank you ^_~
passing shadows: Thanks! I wasn't so sure about it...
Ringo: Wow! What a great compliment!!! I thank you!!!
Sunnyone: Hehe, thanks ;D Stealing kisses...What a wonderful hobby!

Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read, everyone!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

6 posted 2003-03-21 07:08 PM

Yes. What is it?

Beautiful work

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

7 posted 2003-03-21 09:31 PM

Thank you for the comment and the time you took to read this, as always, Albert!!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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