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Lady Air
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Lady Air |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Whisking me away Away the cloud glides Through the honeydew air. Breathe, Give birth to the air Then let her fly free Like a domestic caterpillar. Taste her scent- Rapid and wild Trails on your tongue Yet ridden smoothly As if a rolling pearl. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great imagery! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yeah!!! I do love this, and the easy flowing images it placed before my eyes!!! Bravo!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thank you passing shadows and sunnyone ^_^   I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Whisking me away Away the cloud glides Through the honeydew air. Breathe, Give birth to the air Then let her fly free Like a domestic caterpillar. Loved this part. Very romantic  |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thanks Albert!! You're making me blush with all these great compliments...and I'm not one that likes to blush lol! !I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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