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Moonlight Beach Lovers
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Moonlight Beach Lovers |
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Sun of faith Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 101 |
Moonlight Beach Lovers by Scott Nagel They embrace on the shore So tightly its hard to breath, But this is one time when they dont mind being out of breathe, The beams of moonlight strike their love filled bodies, And enrich them with all the beauty the world does give, Their eyes stare deeply into one-anothers, As words not need to be spoken when a gaze can tell all that needs to be said. Lips press together, and the passion is shared As the two bodies become one, Never to be seperated, always to be loved. |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
good work. love the imagery, descriptions and the overall concept. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good imagery. *sighs* Very romantic Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
romantic stuff! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this shines with such gorgeous romance, I love it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh brings back memories of sand trails through the barracks!!! Thank you! Susan |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
well said and nice >>phantom poet<< |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite nice... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I like this....very sweet and romantic. "Love makes the world go around" |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
a very nice love poem it gets my vote  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is really romantic! Thanks for sharing! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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