Open Poetry #25 |
Never Have To Ask |
sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Something I thought of today while I was driving in my car. Nothing special, nothing that has a deep meaning, just straight forward. Might try and work it into something else a little later, not sure how it would stand on its own. *shrug* ~ Never Have To Ask ~ I will wait for you, all you must do is ask. I will leave for you, all you must do is ask. I will love you always, but this, you will never have to ask. A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, [This message has been edited by sellout007 (02-17-2003 05:37 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
to ask is the task, something I have never been able to do. I like the way you rounded it off without asking. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"I will love you always, but this, you will never have to ask." that is the best part of love of all...h |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ahhh, unconditional love... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
aaaahhhhhhh, young innocent love, where did it all go? |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Never having to ask to be loved. That is the greatest gift you can give. You said this was not deep? I beg to differ...... |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Thanks alot for all the kind words and replies! Muchos Appreciation! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Daniel, This does have deep meaning, even if short and to the point. I like it very much. Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
Ok i conceed, it has meaning and deepness! Go me and my bad self! *does a dance* o) Thanks for the response, really glad you enjoyed it! A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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sellout007 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 108Suburbs of Chicago, IL |
adding to library A dream is but a dream, you can wake up. Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember, |
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